很多学生写的句子之所以有时候看起来非常干瘪,或者说总会有种自己看完以后都非常不满意的感觉。摊开文章一看,一个个短句凑成了整个话题,看起来比较零散。
所以,我们在这个部分用灵魂拷问法来进行句子的基础拓展,
基础任务为“写出逻辑充分,细节饱满的长句子”,
学会融合自己所学会的基础语法以及简单复合句。你需要的只是一个整合能力。
灵魂拷问3个问题:
1
我写这个观点的原因和以及可能带来的结果是什么?
2
我写这个句子的主语和宾语以及出现的各种名词有需要缩小范围,具体人群吗?
3
我写这个观点的出现有限定条件吗?
写的很啰嗦,不想看是吗?那么,请看示例(学生场景):
Students have difficulties in finding employment.
学生们找工作有困难。
灵魂拷问3个问题:
1
为什么说学生找工作有困难。
(due to fierce competition)面临困难,
所以呢?
(result in pressure/lack the ability to support a family? etc.)
2
主语限定
(students who achieve poor grades in their profession)
宾语修饰
(different kinds of difficulties)
介词短语里的名词修饰
(employment that has well-paid salary and decent benefits)
3
有限定条件
(after they graduate from university)
整合(不一定要选用所有拓展素材,选用更贴合写作主题的句子):
Those students who achieve poor grades in their profession are more likely to have different kinds of difficulties in finding employment that has well-paid salary and decent benefits after they graduate from university due to fierce competition.
写作需要知识积累,更需要思维训练。好用的灵魂拷问法快点学起来~~