今天和大家分享的是英思力国考部Mandy老师在改作业期间发现的独立写作最常犯的TOP3三大语法错误。
如果你也中枪,请马上原地修正再继续发力。这些错误一直没有改过来的话,最后就会扎根在独立写作里变成语法问题“钉子户”,提分之路就会困难重重。
不然写得越多,犯错的次数可能就越多。
TOP1 一致性问题
独立写作里最常犯的“一致性问题”就是主语和谓语在数和时态方面的不一致。
当然,还有名词单复数的问题也很常见。这类问题处理的难点在于:正确的用法几乎所有人都知道,但是因为中文中没有对应的习惯,所以几乎都是“习惯性”且“无意识”地写错了。
例1
My best friendsEmma travelled to Singapore last summer.
(friend应该用单数,和后面Emma的数保持一致)
例2
Cleaning the environment is the important ways to improve people's health.
(应该是is an important way)
TPO2 平行结构
当使用连词,尤其是and,连接并列成分时,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
如名词平行;名词短语平行;动词不定时结构平行;动名词平行等等。
例1
After the presentation, their friends will tell them aspects they should adjust, such as some words, deleting some slides, and preparing more questions, etc.
(such as后面三个短语的结构不平行)
例2
I think it is wiser for the government to spend less money on scientific research in terms of its high risks and unimportant.
(high risks 和 unimportant应该保持一致的结构被its修饰)
TPO3 句子成分残缺
这类问题常见的犯错原因,一类是主语过长或插入语使用不熟练;另一类是对句子成分和构成理解有误。比如从句后缺少主句就是很典型的错误案例。
例1
When I was at Duke University as a visiting student, working with a PhD student in a project.
(缺少主句)
例2
My little sister, a middle school student, whose most annoying thing was to study politics because she thought it is the most boring and useless thing in the world.
(主句缺少谓语和宾语)
以上列举出来的这几个都是特别易犯的错误,写作中出现这种错误会大大拉低考官的期待值,希望大家写作中可以努力避开这些天坑,考取理想的成绩!